Tree House Descriptive Passage Written with Fourth Graders11:23 AM
We built our tree house in our backyard, which gave
us lots of space. When you walk by our house, you
can't miss the tree house, because it's very tall--
and it's also brightly striped with red and white, just
like a candy cane. The door is square and made
out of non-perishable gingerbread. In fact, the
whole tree house is edible, which means that we will
have a big candy feast after Christmas is over.
To get into the tree house, you climb a ladder made
out of really, really hard gingerbread. Once inside,
you're rewarded by the sweet smell of fresh-baked
cookies, gingerbread, and candy canes.