Wednesday, December 09, 2009

Tree House Descriptive Passage Written with Fourth Graders

We built our tree house in our backyard, which gave
us lots of space. When you walk by our house, you
can't miss the tree house, because it's very tall--
and it's also brightly striped with red and white, just
like a candy cane. The door is square and made
out of non-perishable gingerbread. In fact, the
whole tree house is edible, which means that we will
have a big candy feast after Christmas is over.
To get into the tree house, you climb a ladder made
out of really, really hard gingerbread. Once inside,
you're rewarded by the sweet smell of fresh-baked
cookies, gingerbread, and candy canes. 

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